Ok heres one for you really.... Significant people with lots of ideas... Im favouring mommy and jenny for this one.

I woke up one day and I just started to repeat this line mystereous line and i wanna see who can make it into a poem. It goes soemthing like this..

As i watch them come and go, i'm still standing.... All alone.

I'm thinking of submitting this to a high school with a poem buut im blank and out of ideas.... wondering if any of u got something.. a short story, poem, or a monologue but im sure u wouldnt be able to make a too good of a monologue with that line.. i prefere a poem because it sorta rhymes so if anybody has any ideas or comments on that wacky line, yeah please tell me

yeah, short story. funny one too. all alone, and wanting to stay that way because I just peed my pants

just kidding. you could do a poem about being alone because you're waiting...
waiting for a specific opportunity
or a person
or a sign
but be vague and illusive
it sounds more legit that way

read langston hughes and you'll get some ideas he's the only poet that i like

As I watch them come and go, I'm still standing.... All alone
I'm waiting for a sign to leave,
a sign to stay,
some air to breathe
I never knew their faces or names.
I never played their little games
I wouldn't bend, in fear of breaking
Yet always looking for a risk worth taking
As I look on, the chills go warm
In the invisible life that I have formed
And yet I wonder where they go
While before I never cared to know.
As I watch them come and go, I'm still standing.... All alone
As I watch them come and go, no longer standing, but still alone.

LOL

DEPRESSING!!!

wow Jenny that was pretty good!

Wow Jenny! You have talent!

Yes, definitely have talent Jenny....I'd like to read more of you've got it

You probably wouldn't want to read it. I get my sadness and anger out in my writing so that I can be a nice being in other aspects.